Hey Lina, your graphic is good, I understand the picture and a part of your poem that's on it, it makes sense and I understand. It's good enough for your draft. All you have to do is add you in it lol. Then your good I guess. Well good job so far and good luck on your final! (:
haha heey lina ! well i really liked your graphic I thought that it all made sense and went with your poem ! and like kaitlyn said all you need is the picture of you ! good luck on the final
You need to truly portray your allusion which yours does not. Take on the characteristics of the imagination and creativity of Dr. Sues and also what is described in the book and display that. AS(1-) I know you can make this a lot better.
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Hey Lina, your graphic is good, I understand the picture and a part of your poem that's on it, it makes sense and I understand. It's good enough for your draft. All you have to do is add you in it lol. Then your good I guess. Well good job so far and good luck on your final! (:
haha heey lina ! well i really liked your graphic I thought that it all made sense and went with your poem ! and like kaitlyn said all you need is the picture of you ! good luck on the final
You need to truly portray your allusion which yours does not. Take on the characteristics of the imagination and creativity of Dr. Sues and also what is described in the book and display that. AS(1-) I know you can make this a lot better.
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